reflections of Eros and psyche story

I think I do think creatively I make image with my story and it move just like a story what I say, so people will interesting of my story.I am very proud for my write, because this is a first time I write a lot by myself. I think this is very good but some thing I need to improve is plus the punctuation and make the note card, so I can tell my story smooth and clear. I think this assignment's challenging is make the image, so I will do very carefully. I learn need to plus punctuation so my story will be better.