

The orphan boy felt lonely he always look stars every night but one day one star is missing than one day a boy name Kileken he make friend with orphan he live in Kileken's house Kileken always do all the things before sunrise final orphan boy know Kilekenis that miss star.
Hey Ken! Me, YooDam! As you know I'm here for ESL. When I read about your summary, I think you need more words in it,and it looks quite short. Also you forgot to put image on the post. But I think you did well. Try to put more sentences on it.
ReplyDeleteKen orphan means 孤兒...
ReplyDeletethe orphan boy is not lonely = =|||
it is the old man....
and kileken didn't make friends with orphan he made friends with the old man's, and Kileken lived in the old man's house.....
我把你打ㄉ字翻譯一下:
ReplyDelete孤兒男孩總是感到孤獨,每天晚上看星星,但有一天少ㄌ一顆星星.Kileken跟孤兒結交.Kileken住在孤兒家.Kileken都在班晚前做完事情,孤兒男孩知道小姐Kilekenis明星。
miss=小姐or想念