Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Orphan Boy






The orphan boy felt lonely he always look stars every night but one day one star is missing than one day a boy name Kileken he make friend with orphan he live in Kileken's house Kileken always do all the things before sunrise final orphan boy know Kilekenis that miss star.






3 comments:

  1. Hey Ken! Me, YooDam! As you know I'm here for ESL. When I read about your summary, I think you need more words in it,and it looks quite short. Also you forgot to put image on the post. But I think you did well. Try to put more sentences on it.

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  2. Ken orphan means 孤兒...
    the orphan boy is not lonely = =|||
    it is the old man....
    and kileken didn't make friends with orphan he made friends with the old man's, and Kileken lived in the old man's house.....

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  3. 我把你打ㄉ字翻譯一下:

    孤兒男孩總是感到孤獨,每天晚上看星星,但有一天少ㄌ一顆星星.Kileken跟孤兒結交.Kileken住在孤兒家.Kileken都在班晚前做完事情,孤兒男孩知道小姐Kilekenis明星。

    miss=小姐or想念

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